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Sweet Dusk

taken by: j.ajabad 2013 the color of the clouds reminded me of the pink of cotton candy thus this poem emerged...

taken by: j.ajabad 2013
the color of the clouds reminded me of the pink of cotton candy thus this poem emerged…

A cotton candy sunset
a sugar coated dusk
permeates the sky
my mouth waters.

(c) j.ajabad 2013

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4 responses to “Sweet Dusk

  1. nothingprofound August 15, 2013 at 1:35 pm

    I like how you transformed a visual experience into a gustatory one. Sometimes the things we see in nature are so moving we feel we can “taste” them.

  2. Janene August 16, 2013 at 10:50 am

    Short and sweet (pun intended). I like it!

  3. Helena Fortissima August 17, 2013 at 10:26 am

    Enjoyed your poem! It’s only natural that such beauty would evoke visceral, hungry feelings…what a yummy sunset!

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